Original sentence
We all have role models in life. Athletes we hope to be as good as someday, models and actresses we want to look and act like.
Corrected sentence
We have role models in life-athletes we hope to be as good as someday, models and actresses we want to look at act like.
The main problem with these two sentences was that they needed to be connected with the dash because my second sentence was a fragment it did not make since standing alone. The dash makes it one sentence without being a run on.
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